Star

A day spent without you

Is a endless dead path

I sware my love is true

Yet longing for my star

I don’t know where are you

I wish it’s not that far

Somewhere on depth of galaxies

Or somewhere buried in heart.

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10 thoughts on “Star

    • prashantt says:

      I checked the mail but the spelling is correct here though i am so happy for your concern Ma’am…mera grammar mistakes common hai because i am so lazy that i never recheck my work…πŸ˜›πŸ˜Š

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  1. atrangizindagieksafar says:

    A day spent without you
    Is a endless dead path
    I sware my love is true

    HereπŸ‘†in third line it should be SWEAR..(to make a solemn statement or promise undertaking to do something or affirming that something is the case.)
    Swearing by your love if that’s what you meant

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