Alive!


Sucked up with this mean world

rules,regulations..filth & dirt

craving to take a dip & feel refresh

To rise above the rest

In the bug of elixir that

heals disguise,the real pain killer

Gulped fierce in tequilla shots

whisky on the rocks

Slaughtered the past matters

now i feel alive & better.

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17 thoughts on “Alive!

  1. writeshefali says:

    Whiskey on the rocks…Hmm.. The feeling of being on the high definitely feels like you are rocking…i liked the lines n it’s also true…a lot of them resort to a night of drining…making them feel better, free themselves from stress, pain n feel rejuvenated after drowning their sorrows in those tequilas…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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    • prashantt says:

      So you got the crux of the poem and thank you though i bieng besharam told you to read my posts..๐Ÿ˜›i tried this kind of writing very first time so just looking for response on it.โ˜บโ˜บ

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      • writeshefali says:

        What’s besharam in that???… We are friends aren’t we?… Itna interaction ke baad u can ask me to do this small thing… And Anyways I would have checked it even if you hadn’t asked…
        The lines are really good, I got the meaning n emotion behind every line you wrote ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿผ

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        • prashantt says:

          Arre i am sorry..yeh toh emotional scene ho gaya๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚and scene reminds me that now no more action scenes are happening on your proff front..thank you once again & say oats ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘

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